LO: To use adverbs and adjectives in my writing
SC: - Underline my Adverbs
- Underline my Adjectives
- Sentence structure is correct
- Punctuation is correct
- Draft / Edit your work
Sylvia’s Writing picture
Me and my mother was walking quickly to the shop, it started raining so we pulled out the black umbrella.
Me and my mother saw living fish falling down from the sky, my mother said ‘oh look we don’t need to go to the shop anymore to buy fish we can just catch it from the sky.
Me and my mother catched two big fish from the sky and took it home to cook quickly for dinner, so we can go to sleep.
We waited for an hour and a half for the fish to cook, so we can have dinner.
The fish was ready to eat, so my mother got some food out and put it onto plates for us to eat.
We were walking along the forest and we saw a village filled with tiny little creatures made of wood and different kinds of things.
They were so busy that they didn’t notice that we were right there.
My friend stood on something and the little tiny creatures were running fast around in circles not knowing what to do?
My friend freaked out so she picked up the thing that she stood on and looked, she said ‘oh no’ I am so sorry for standing on you what can I do to make it better?
The little creature said something but we didn’t understand, so we said sorry I beg your parden - so the little creature did sign language and it used it’s hands and said pull my leg, so she pulled it’s leg and the creature came back to normal so she put it back down and we left.
I hopped onto this spinning turner and I went really fast around in circles.
I tried to stop but it wouldn’t stop so I asked my friend to help me stop the Crazy ride I was on.
My friend tried to help stop the ride, it started to slow down a little bit but she had to keep slowing it down.
I jumped off the ride and bonked my head on the edge of the crazy thing I was on.
I said wow i am never coming to this place again and going on that ride ever.
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